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 All Season Vacation Deluxe 21 Carry On Rolling Duffel Bag Black Houndstooth  US $39.99
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 Rockland Bel Air 18 Carry On Tote Duffle Bag Zebra US $23.99
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 20 Duffel Tote Rolling Luggage Wheels Overnight Gym Bag Travel Pink Zebra US $42.99
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 19 Duffel Tote Bag Rolling Luggage Case Wheel Purse Black White Cow Print US $39.99
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 Black Samsonite Duffle style Suitcase Large Barely used US $10.00
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 Ralph Lauren Polo Green White Duffle Bag US $9.99
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 Samsonite Casual Wheeled Smooth Rolling Duffel Luggage Black US $34.95
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 Vera Bradley LARGE SMALL Duffels in Mediterranean White NWT US $178.00
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 VERA BRADLEY Large Duffel in PRICILLA PINK Gym or Travel Bag RETAIL $8500 US $51.00
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 VERA BRADLEY Large Duffel in ISLAND BLOOMS Travel or Gym Bag RETAIL $8500 US $35.02
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 NWT Vera Bradley Small Duffel Pinwheel Pink made in USA travel bag breast cancer US $69.99
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 Vtg Tan Canvas Leather Trim Ventura Duffle Bag Weekend Traveler Carry On US $132.50
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 TOMMY HILFIGER DUFFLE GYM BAG RED BLUE WHITE LARGE US $33.25
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 Paws White travel Carry on Duffle Bag Large New Luggage 22 US $24.99
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 White Star DUFFLE BAG LUGGAGE CARRY ON OVERNIGHT 16 US $24.99
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 Rockland Bel Air 18 Carry On Tote Duffle Bag Pink Dot US $23.99
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 WHITE STARS DUFFLE BAG LUGGAGE CARRY ON OVERNIGHT 22 US $24.99
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 Large Dark Blue Princess House Rolling Bag US $10.00
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 Victorias Secret PINK 3 Piece Luggage Set US $85.00
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 LIZ CLAIBORNE Black and White Houndstooth Rolling Duffle EUC US $139.00
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 20 Duffel Tote Bag Luggage Purse Travel Red Betty Boop US $35.95
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 Lacoste Garment Travel Duffle Big Bag US $10.49
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 NWT authentic Vera Bradley Small Duffel in Peacock made in USA travel bag rare US $69.99
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 Rockland Deluxe 22 Rolling Duffel Bag Zebra Print US $34.99
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 ★ $200 Delsey Helium Colours 26 4 Wheel Trolley ★ LIME US $49.01 |
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 Superdry Duffle Bag White w goldblack large kitbag bomber luggage gym US $85.00
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 HTF NWT NEW SCENIC OUTDOORS PRINT EXTRA LARGE NORTH FACE BASE CAMP DUFFLE BAG US $184.99
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 New Ogio Layover Rolling Carry On Suitcase White Stripes US $99.99
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 19 Duffel Tote Gym Bag Luggage Purse Travel Case Overnight Skull Pink US $24.99
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 ★ $240 Delsey Helium Fusion Lite 20 Trolley Duffel ★ US $45.01 |
 20 Fire Rescue Duffle Bag US $55.00
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 Rare Large Lacoste Rolling Duffle Luggage Blue Red White US $24.99
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 ★ $240 Revo SPIN 25 Upright Suitcase Luggage ★ GRAY US $68.00 |
 FREE SHIPPING QUILTED COTTON LARGE DUFFLE BAG DUFFEL US $35.99
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 ★ $320 Perry Ellis 24 Portfolio Somerset Rolling Suitcase Luggage CarryOn US $41.00 |
 Black White Damask Print Duffle Bag US $19.99
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 NEW COACH HERITAGE STRIPE DUFFLE Travel Bag F77278 BLACK WHITE 77278 US $299.95
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 Wheeled Duffle Gym Bag Pull Rod Luggage Travel Bag Rolling Bag b US $29.99
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 Victorias Secret Pink Duffle Bag Cabin Luggage Wheelie Roller Suitcase US $125.00
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 ERGOPAD® NONSLIP COMFY SHOULDER PAD GARMENT BAG CARRYON US $7.95
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 BLACK TOILE PRINT GARMENT BAG DANCE TRAVEL LUGGAGE US $24.99
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 Ralph Lauren Black Cream Houndstooth Coated Canvas leather Wkend Duffle Bag US $119.99
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 20Duffel Tote Bag Rolling Luggage Wheel Purse Leopard US $47.99
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 Black White Pink Zebra Print Duffle Bag US $19.99
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 Loungefly Hello Kitty Black White Carry On Duffle Bag US $60.80
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 CARLOS FALCHI Adjustable Strap Tote Duffle Bag Luggage US $26.00
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 DVF DIANE von FURSTENBERG COLOR ON THE GO ORANGE WHITE 20 WHEELED CITY BAG $300 US $95.96
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 DVF DIANE von FURSTENBERG BLUE WHITE 20 WHEELED DUFFLE $300 VALUE NEW US $95.96
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 American Flyer Fireworks 5 Piece Spinner Luggage Set Black and White US $199.99
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 PERSONALIZED SMALL HOT PINK ZEBRA DANCE GYM CHEER DUFFLE BAG US $30.99
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 PERSONALIZED MEDIUM BLACK DAMASK CHEER DANCE GYM DUFFLE BAG US $35.99
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 White Star DUFFLE BAG LUGGAGE CARRY ON OVERNIGHT 22 US $31.99
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 ROCKLAND BEL AIR CARRY ON TOTE DUFFLE BAG ZEBRA $40 US $32.99
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 WESTERN MONTANA WEST BLACK BROWN WHITE COW PRINT SUITCASE LUGGAGE SET DUFFLE BAG US $189.95
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 BLACK WHITE POLKA DOTS TRAVEL DUFFLE GYM BAG Luggage US $32.99
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 PERSONALIZED MEDIUM HOT PINK ZEBRA CHEER DANCE GYM DUFFLE BAG US $35.99
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 TERRIDA Italian DESIGNER CHERRY RED LEATHER DUFFLE BAG W SHOE COMPARTMENT US $700.00
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 VERA BRADLEY Large Duffel in DOODLE DAISY BLUE Travel or Gym Bag RETAIL $8500 US $52.99
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 Lacoste Garment Travel Duffle Suit Big Bag US $44.95
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 Embassy Genuine Leather Fire Rescue Duffle Bag 20 x 11” x 10 1 4” US $35.99
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 21 OVERNIGHT Duffle TOTE Bag Wheeled Carry On Luggage QUILTED Zebra JE VEUX US $58.00
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 COACH 77278 Heritage Stripe Signature Duffle Luggage Travel Bag Black White NWT US $299.99
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 VERA BRADLEY Large Duffel in BAROQUE Black White Travel or Gym Bag Ret 8500 US $52.99
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 Damask Travel Bag Duffle Bag Gym Bag Carry on with Fuchsia Trim 16in NWT US $17.99
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 Black and White Damask Travel Bag Duffle Bag Gym Bag Black Trim 16in NWT US $17.99
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 PERSONALIZED LARGE PURPLE ZEBRA DANCE GYM LUGGAGE DUFFLE BAG US $32.99
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 WESTERN MONTANA WEST RED WHITE BLUE TEXAS STAR SUITCASE LUGGAGE SET DUFFLE BAG US $189.95
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 20Duffel Tote Bag Rolling Luggage Wheels Travel Pink US $47.95
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 Duffel Bag Luggage Carry On Zebra Print with Purple Trim Square Duffle SO CUTE US $29.99
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 Duffel Bag Luggage Carry On Zebra Print with Pink Trim Square Duffle SO CUTE US $29.99
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 COACH 77278 Heritage Stripe Duffle Overnight Luggage Travel Bag Black White NWT US $296.99
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 LeSportsac LOVE PATCH Large Weekender Duffel Bag HEARTS US $69.99
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 PINK WHITE DOT DUFFLE GYM BAG SPORTS CARRY ON OVERNIGHT US $19.89
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 NEW BLUE WHITE PAISLEY QUILTED DUFFLE LIGHT WEIGHT SMALLER WEEKENDER US $19.99
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 Houndstooth Travel Bag US $24.99
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 2 Piece Set Vera Bradley Jasmine Large Duffel Duffle Garment Bag Travel Luggage US $149.99
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 Ralph Lauren RRL Varsity Canvas Leather Duffle Bag New US $494.10
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 PERSONALIZED HOT PINK AND LIME ZEBRA DANCE GYM CHEER DUFFLE BAG US $30.99
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 PERSONALIZED LARGE BLUE ZEBRA DUFFLE BAG DANCE GYM LUGGAGE US $32.99
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What do you think of my short passage for my novel?
I am fourteen years old and wants to be a writer. I need help taking off on a good first page and I enjoy writing. So please tell me what you think?
A cool summer breeze brushed against Crystal Collins’s warm cheeks. It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon and not one cloud was insight. A big white airplane soared several feet above her head, making a high, whistling sound. She was standing outside the airport with her younger brother, J.C., her mother, Joyce, and her father, Ron. She had one purple suitcase dragging in one hand and a purple duffle bag in the other. Her dark-brown hair was tied back into a medium-length ponytail; her dark brown eyes gleamed into the sunlight, the hem of her purplish-blue dress flowed against the wind, and her metallic Coach platforms scraped against the freshly paved sidewalk.
Since you are only 14 it is pretty good. My advice would be to try to make it less choppy. read the passage out loud, it really does not flow very well. Your descriptions are good,and really paint a picture of the scene. The last sentence is way too long, but was probably your subconcious way of trying to make the story less choppy, but just goes on too long. Also how can her shoes scrape if she is standing? Just a small thing.... honestly it is not great, but there are some good things in there keep practicing.
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